Tuesday, November 29, 2005


Boat riDe

i tink its raining ryte over my head
ever since i got out of bed
tots of u have bin pouring dwn
drownin out my sobbing sounds
light drizzle fallin dwn on my face like ur kiss
d 1 dat i had ever so miss
i wasnt d wind whu blew me away
it was u whu really made my day
n d flowin water had pushed u so far frm me
d shower was gettin heavy its gettin hard 2 c
juz b4 i amlost got swept in d long gang(drain la...)
u stretched out ur hand n saved me dis "bung"(im not 1 ok)
u were like my raincoat in d storm
protecting me n keepin me warm
aftr d waters start 2 subside
"wont u come wif me on a lil boat ride?"
u asked, n i took ur hand
n 2gether in d sunset we went 2 tan!

d wrd "bung" in line 12 is a figure of speech it has absilutely no refrence 2 d writer

went crazii; at

10:11 PM




HeRE i am my words are blood red

and here's what came out of my crazy little head

well if only words were enough to say

all thats inside me that i wanna express

here;s what words CAN potray

read and you'll know the rest
Me

Jonas Ho
shotgun seventeen


I can't go back
*Read the old 1s i think they are nicer*

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